James Garza
8212 W. Apollo AveRichland, WA 99336
Zak Ebrahim
I am the son of a terrorist: Here’s how I chose my peace.
Peace Activist Ted2014
Dear Zak Ebrahim :
Hello Mr. Ebrahim. My name is James Garza and I am currently
a student at Washington State University. The reason why am I writing this
letter to you is because I recently viewed your TED Talk, “I am the son of a
terrorist: Here’s how I chose peace” and I enjoyed every aspect of what you had
to say.
It was one of the most inspiring TED Talks I have seen yet,
and it really takes a special person to come out in front of millions and
express your relation to one of the most terrifying acts in the bombing of the
World Trade Center. So thank you for that. I think what really hit home base is
the deep tone in your voice and how you expressed your story to your audience.
I noticed you would take pauses between sentences which allowed the audience to
think and understand your story. It just shows that you were not happy in what
you had to say, but you were up there talking about it for a purpose, in hopes
that someone someday who is compelled to use violence well realize there is a
better way, like you mention in the last part of your speech.
One thing I will suggest though, that I thought could have
helped is moving around the stage more while you give your speech. It will help
engage the audience and bring more of an interactive demeanor to the stage. The
speech definitely has the potential to increase the motivation with a slight
adjustment in body language will keep interest and therefor have more
effectiveness in your message.
Either way, it was an intriguing story to hear, and I thank
you for taking the time to read my letter.Sincerely,
James Garza
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